Verworfene Versionen

Paul Whalley
Paul Whalley

Lesson time: (4min 7sec)

In diesem Abschnitt führt dich Paul durch die verworfenen Versionen des Stücks "Red" mit der Sängerin Emmi Green. Wichtiger Rat in dieser Phase: Lass dir Zeit, führe deine Ideen bis zum Ende und hab keine Angst davor, Versionen zu verwerfen.

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Music Lesson

Introduction to the Pre-Chorus

So, guys, in this version of the song, you'll notice there's a whole new section here called the pre-chorus that we didn't actually end up using in the song. I'm going to play a little bit of that now for you.

New Melody and Lyrics

  • Completely new melody
  • New lyrics for this section as well

The main reason we didn't end up using this is:

  • The pacing of the melody was pretty similar to the verse melody
  • It wasn't that interesting to listen to, it just felt like an extension of the section
  • The melody is quite jumpy, not that sing-along friendly
  • Overall, it wasn't too catchy

Other Parts That Didn't Make the Final Cut

There are a few other parts that never made the final cut:

  • Bass Guitar Part: Sonically, it didn't quite fit the core of the record.
  • String Parts: While they are very pretty, they took the song down a much more organic route, which I thought didn't really suit the song in the end.

But as you can see, it's a pretty fully thought out idea. There are:

  • Drums
  • Bass
  • All the pads
  • Guitar parts

So it's really... I've sort of seen it through and thought it all out.

The Clapping Idea

The main thing that came out of this, though, was actually the development of this clapping idea up here that we've talked about earlier.

Seeing this idea through enabled me to start finding the first of these parts that would really glue the record together and help it become a cohesive product in the end.

About the instructor

Paul Whalley
Paul Whalley

Paul Whalley ist Multiinstrumentalist, Produzent und Songwriter mit einem bewusst breiten Sound. Er verbrachte Jahre als Tour-Session-Musiker mit Künstlern wie Mumford & Sons und Ellie Goulding auf der Straße. Klassisch ausgebildet, besitzt er einen Bachelor in instrumentaler Interpretation und einen Master in Komposition der Guildhall School of Music. Seit er vom Touren in die Produktion und das Songwriting gewechselt ist, hat er mit Künstlern wie NAO, Wretch 32 und Nina Nesbitt gearbeitet und auf Top-40-Platten weltweit gespielt, darunter Little Mix' 'Shout Out to My Ex'. Er ist in den Tileyard Studios im Norden Londons ansässig, wo er für große britische Labels schreibt und produziert und neue Künstler aufbaut. Auf MusicGurus zerlegen er und Emmi Green einen Pop-Song von Grund auf – jede Arrangement- und Produktionsentscheidung offengelegt – für Songwriter und Produzenten, die hören wollen, wie Hits wirklich gebaut werden. read more

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